Firstly there is a problem with the harmonica where the harness had moved, because it is a live recording after all. The other is that I got the line wrong at the end - "One day the underdog, one day it ends", where it was meant to be "no longer the underdog, one day it ends". Now though listening with fresh ears, I actually think that the line works better that is there.
I like the song very much, and find the melody very effective. There is always the possibility that with a serious subject like this that you could go over the top, where this way it's just getting the message across, and I think the lyrics are terrific.Sometimes there are very rare occasions where you just write something and you can surprise yourself. This is definitely one of those moments. I was just picking up the guitar playing, and the lyrics were coming, so I kept putting it down, writing it out (including chords) and carrying on like that.

Suddenly as I would have put the guitar down to write normally, the bridge with music and lyrics came out, and that was it. I thought it was such a powerful part with the words and the music, and I knew there would have to be an instrumental bit after the bridge, because of the whole meaning of those lines in the bridge.
Then of course I wrote the last verse and the chorusy bit (I suppose it's a refrain really, but there it is). The whole thing of where the verses go, the bridge, and everything was from that original writing session.
Performed live, it has a strength to it that I think a full production may have destroyed. A beautiful song in my opinion.
HERE IS THE SONG!
Thank you for reading, please take care.

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